fishpit.com

There is a place for people who are Unreal-people who gave up reality to become their own legend and story-and they neither go to heaven nor to hell. But their is a place for them that is both lovely and terrible, an unseen country with 20 provinces;

Lust-an ocean full of whirlpools, tidal waves, oil spills, dead fish, dirty driftwood and dead seabirds.
(Lechers, rapists, stalkers, adulterers etc.)

Gluttony-a valley made up of leftover food, chicken bones, wine rivers and malnutrition.

Greed and Covet-a mine with molten silver rivers, bloody golden statues and literal Gold Fever.

Unrighteous and Vanity-a mire of tar, petroleum, stinging pitch, forest of thorns and hornets.
(Fundies, fanatics, televangelists, self-righteous puritans and pharisees)

Heterodoxy-an Ossuary lair of catacomb ovens, boiling mud & clay, and claustrophobic galleries.
(Heretics, apostates, blasphemers, idolaters, cynics and iconoclasts)

Anger and Wrath-a giant funnel pit crater with a lake of sulfur and ashes and tower of spikes.

Despair and Coward-a rainy gloomy meadow and a dark hollow of mist, howls, agony and growls.

Murder-a barren desert of locusts, hearing voices in the head, skeletons and lakes of bile and spit.

Remembering Evil-a stony gorge filled with rabid, vicious dogs and a river of lava, blood and mud.
(Haters, grudgers and avengers)

Idle Words-a junkyard of green mud, sludge, slugs, cockroaches and yellow rain.
(Flatterers, insults, ridicules and dirty talkers)

Deception-a garden of villas, luxuries, nothing new, or hypocrites with two heads and two tongues.

Magic and Necromancy-a giant maze of puzzles, stairways, insanity, senility and delirium.

Injustice and Usury-an amphitheater with a muddy ground and dusty dirty huts and a rain of rocks.

Sodomy-a burning city; hot inside, cold outside. Full of disease, impotence and blindness.
(Necrophiles, Pedophiles, Incest, Pederast, Orgies, Molesters, Bestiality and Sadists)

Robbery-a ruined city of sterile grounds, hairless rats and vicious giant cats, owls and snakes.

Laziness-an open mind of heavy till, restraining from any muscle movement and sweaty body odors.

Thuggery-a salty swamp with slopes, snapping turtles, mosquitoes, deer flies, whipping vine trees.
(abusers, cruelty, thugs, unmerciful etc)

Slander-an old cavern full of harassing vicious snakes, scorpions, spiders, frogs and lizards.

Envy-a damp chasm with headaches, stomachaches, misery, green skin and constant scratches.

Egoism-a cold country of frozen men up to the necks starring upwards; suffering neck pains. bloodshot eyes and frostbites, icicles with blood stains, and a mountain sized castle of stone and frost.

There is a place for people who are Unreal-people who gave up reality to become their own legend and story-and they neither go to heaven nor to hell. But their is a place for them that is both lovely and terrible, an unseen country with 20 provinces;

Lust-an ocean full of whirlpools, tidal waves, oil spills, dead fish, dirty driftwood and dead seabirds.
(Lechers, rapists, stalkers, adulterers etc.)

Gluttony-a valley made up of leftover food, chicken bones, wine rivers and malnutrition.

Greed and Covet-a mine with molten silver rivers, bloody golden statues and literal Gold Fever.

Unrighteous and Vanity-a mire of tar, petroleum, stinging pitch, forest of thorns and hornets.
(Fundies, fanatics, televangelists, self-righteous puritans and pharisees)

Heterodoxy-an Ossuary lair of catacomb ovens, boiling mud & clay, and claustrophobic galleries.
(Heretics, apostates, blasphemers, idolaters, cynics and iconoclasts)

Anger and Wrath-a giant funnel pit crater with a lake of sulfur and ashes and tower of spikes.

Despair and Coward-a rainy gloomy meadow and a dark hollow of mist, howls, agony and growls.

Murder-a barren desert of locusts, hearing voices in the head, skeletons and lakes of bile and spit.

Remembering Evil-a stony gorge filled with rabid, vicious dogs and a river of lava, blood and mud.
(Haters, grudgers and avengers)

Idle Words-a junkyard of green mud, sludge, slugs, cockroaches and yellow rain.
(Flatterers, insults, ridicules and dirty talkers)

Deception-a garden of villas, luxuries, nothing new, or hypocrites with two heads and two tongues.

Magic and Necromancy-a giant maze of puzzles, stairways, insanity, senility and delirium.

Injustice and Usury-an amphitheater with a muddy ground and dusty dirty huts and a rain of rocks.

Sodomy-a burning city; hot inside, cold outside. Full of disease, impotence and blindness.
(Necrophiles, Pedophiles, Incest, Pederast, Orgies, Molesters, Bestiality and Sadists)

Robbery-a ruined city of sterile grounds, hairless rats and vicious giant cats, owls and snakes.

Laziness-an open mind of heavy till, restraining from any muscle movement and sweaty body odors.

Thuggery-a salty swamp with slopes, snapping turtles, mosquitoes, deer flies, whipping vine trees.
(abusers, cruelty, thugs, unmerciful etc)

Slander-an old cavern full of harassing vicious snakes, scorpions, spiders, frogs and lizards.

Envy-a damp chasm with headaches, stomachaches, misery, green skin and constant scratches.

Egoism-a cold country of frozen men up to the necks starring upwards; suffering neck pains. bloodshot eyes and frostbites, icicles with blood stains, and a mountain sized castle of stone and frost.

so you've established the environment- (very interesting by the way)
will your story follow specific people in each?
sounds like a cautionary tale
or is it a suspense/horror?
what are your influences?
you've got a huge task before you- but it could be very cool!
good luck!

can't wait till someone makes it a movie!

It gave me a bon.er. 10/10.

Seems like this is based off Buddhism's depictions of hell...good outline, quite descriptive.

interesting concept but i dont see a story line...

8.5/10